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Cat Practice by MissKittens Cat Practice by MissKittens
Still need some work on legs and such, but i think im getting a little better >~<

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:iconnightstartehwolf:
ok first off this is soo cute! i meant really adorable! just like all of your art =3 ok starting off with the pros~

Pros~

the ears are really good! they are pointed and straight!
the facial expression is adorable! and you marked out where the chin..ish area is.
the back legs are good (way better then mine if you ask me =/ XD)
the eyes are adorable! and the back is really good!

now the cons D': (i hope i don't sound mean XD)

Cons~
the tail is a little short, some cats have short tails, but it doesn't look right on this picture.
the front leg looks a bit out of place and awkward :P
and the top of the head suddenly fades when getting to the ear, is that just an effect from the brush?
and now that i look at it..the eyes are un even it looks like the cat has a little lazy eye D': and we don't want that!

now this is a wonderful piece Kitten! really cute! i hope this helps you!

~Nightstar
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This is gonna be a really short critique.
The legs are really good ;U;
But what I think is weird: The cat doesn't have a neck xD Maybe lower the back down, so it looks better? ;D
And the stomach is too low :3
Thats it -Types a for the stupid word thing-
a a a a a aa a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a aa a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a aa
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imgoodatdrawing Featured By Owner May 1, 2013
Thanks 4 da fanart
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Bellywelly Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012
i love the face and head. they look amazing!
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JubliantTroo Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I''d like to give a little critique here. c:
You did a nice job on the back and the tail looks very nice too. Also, the face is very cute, especially the fluffy cheeks and shiny eyes. :3
But maybe the ears are a little too long? Draw them rather wider and less high next time maybe.
Check ou this picture, which will practically visualize the rest of my critique: [link]
The legs are too long on this one- hehee I can tell you draw a lot of canines. x) Aso the perspective on the front paws is a bit weird- keep the perspective on the hind paws (is that what it's called?) in mind! Also note that the front legs start further below and the shape of the hind legs could be improved a little- it's very curvy right now.
Hope that this is not too much and that I could help!
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MissKittens Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012
Oh this is very helpful! :o ill take in your notes! Thank you so much!
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:iconjublianttroo:
JubliantTroo Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'm glad I could help. eue You're very welcome!
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ArtizticMe Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
Bah, I don't believe the critique by ~Alljammedout55 :P
I think it's perfect (:
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Emberdahkitteh Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
AUIGAYCRAYGHF^WTYGAFTUYAUG*YUFAY THIS IS BETTER THAN MINE. *W*
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SkittyStrawberries Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Filmographer
Kitten this is really good!!! 8DDD Especially the head!!!
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:iconmistymochi:
MistyMochi Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012   Digital Artist
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It might not be much help but this as much as I could help~ u v u''
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:iconlunarcrab:
lunarcrab Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
i did some redlines for you :3
[link]
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:iconanime-the-dino:
Anime-The-Dino Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, your getting so much better!
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:iconpocketglob:
PocketGlob Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sooo cute ; v ;
You're getting better at anatomy c:
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:iconkittykatfangs:
KittyKatFangs Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AWESOME! may I redline? ^^
if not thats fine X3
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:iconmisskittens:
MissKittens Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
sure :3
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KittyKatFangs Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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hopefully you can understand it :3
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KittyKatFangs Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ok!
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:iconlinkaton:
Linkaton Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Considering I cannot explain properly; here's my critique / redline for you.
[link]
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The-Lunar-Fox Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
alright... I have a quick critique on this and I wouldn't have anything else to fit the 100 word minimum, ao here... it seems like the chest is very deep. maybe you could try bringing it up a little? and as for the legs they for the most part look great. I'd suggest makind the back hips more round, and all the legs starting a little lower off the body.

The tail looks nice though, and the head looks amazing ;w;

very good job kitten :clap:
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The-Lunar-Fox Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ugg typos that ao is supposed to be so ;)
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Animallover08 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Student General Artist
can... an this be used as a lineart???
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:iconlinkaton:
Linkaton Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
This is a practice not a free line art xD
if she had a free line art it would say it in the title or description.
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Animallover08 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Student General Artist
i know that... but still i asked before i used..
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:iconlinkaton:
Linkaton Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
You need to wait until SHE responds.
But she doesn't want it being used lol!
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Animallover08 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student General Artist
i didnt use it yet!!
how do you know she doesnt want it used????
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:iconlinkaton:
Linkaton Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Because I talk to her on skype
and I'm good friends with her lol?

That's how.

So please don't use unless it SAYS "Free Lineart". Simple as that.

And in kittens words "It's a white cat with blue eyes"
that doesn't signal it as a "Hey look free lineart!"
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Animallover08 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student General Artist
okay!! well im sorry okay!!!

this doesnt mean you have to be mean... i was just asking HER...
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kitineko Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
daw
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erinHTFwolf Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awww its amazing
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foxtail36 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D you are getting MUCH better. ^w^
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atila777 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Student Filmographer
that is...Great :iconinloveplz:
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Azorium Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
Thats great! Anytime I just do lineart... it looks funny until I color it in ;w; my lines need some work XD
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Significant-Others Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
O-O
Way better than what I could do. xD
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CresentCake Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Maybe the toes on the paws should be a little smaller! C:
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Holowisewolf Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
very nicely done! The only thing I would say needs to be fixed is that the body is a bit to thick, try making the cat a bit slimmer and the head a bit bigger, but they are very tiny things to fix, very nice, well done owo
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Kulia-Shadow-Stalker Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Can I redline this?
(I don't think I can explain what I see is odd looking in text xD)
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MissKittens Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012
sure
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Kulia-Shadow-Stalker Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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:3
I'm not the best at anatomy, but these are the areas that need improvement and this is how I think you could try improve them :)
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Nightstartehwolf Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
it's so cute! i will give a critique =3
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